Index: work/trim_video_doc/script.txt
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--- work/trim_video_doc/script.txt	(revision 18969)
+++ work/trim_video_doc/script.txt	(revision 18970)
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 
 source: trim-construct-2n3904.ogv at http://scififaster.net/rnd-doc-work/
 
-title: example using pcb-rnd's ddraft plugin trim tool
-description: using trim to create a silk drawing suitable for a TO-92 type part
+title: example using pcb-rnd's ddraft plugin trim action
+description: using trim action to create a silk drawing suitable for a TO-92 type part
 
 [during the first setence of the narration, a still image of
 https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/e/ea/2n3904.jpg
@@ -10,21 +10,21 @@
 should be shown, captioned with the url as "source: "]
 
 script:
-This video shows how to use pcb-rnd's trim tool with the selected argument to easily create the silk graphics of a TO-92 footprint.
+This video shows how to use pcb-rnd's trim action with the selected argument to easily create the silk graphics of a TO-92 footprint.
 
-first draw an arc and modify the arc object properties to turn it into a
-complete circle
+First, select the arc tool to draw an arc, and modify the arc object properties
+to turn it into a complete circle (the value for arc/angle/delta should be 360)
 
-second switch the drawing style to orthogonal mode, using the / key.
-Ortho mode is shown in the operational readout below the main window, as an (X)
+Second, select the line tool, and make sure that you are in orthogonal mode
+(toggle the mode using the / key) Ortho mode is shown in the operational
+readout below the main window, as an (X).
 
-draw the vertical line bisecting the circle and extending beyond it
+Draw the vertical line bisecting the circle and extending beyond it
 
-switch to the selection tool and select the circle, trim(selected), and click
-on the parts of the vertical line to remove
+Switch to the selection tool and select the circle, use the trim(selected)
+action, and click on the parts of the vertical line that extend outside the
+circle to remove them.
 
-select the line, use the trim(selected) action and remove the section of the circle
- to create the outline of the TO-92 package
+No select the line segment and again use the trim(selected) action to remove
+the arc segment of the circle to create the outline of the TO-92 package
 
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-